Out of the blue she caught
sight of a fruit so appealing
so unique n so tempting
but deep down she knew
she shudn't long for tht fruit
yet she wanted to have a taste
each day made her crave for it more
she wanted to taste jst a bit
to see how it wud taste
how it wud melt in her mouth
and then one day it happend
she finally took the chance
she let herself a bite of the forbidden fruit
jst a small one to taste
and it filled her soul
and now she longs for more
but Alas! it still is the forbidden fruit...
19/03/07'
9 comments:
V touching... :D
By da way duz forbidden fruit refer to the guy she luvs? ;) Kn take da meanin dat way too dho! :D
once upon a time, i was a forbidden fruit, whom someone took a good bite off. now i wish i never met that girl.
waylander ehe its kinda like tht;)
anonymous.. bt aint the memeory sweet;)
dhen goaheh noon dho!
hehehe again its very nice dear!
s' real nice =) (y)
hmm v niice:)
its such a human weakness to long for what is prohibited to us..you have portrayed this desire beautifully in your poem.
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