You may point fingers
Often sneer and smirking at me
Ungrateful you say I am
All your tricks all your false smiles
Reminiscing you are, in pure pretense
Enslaved you are more than me
All through and through I may be drenched
Loathing my surrounding and loathing you
Oblivious to happiness and cursing life
Tripping and falling I try making my way
Look at me and look at yourself
Inside you will see we are the same
Kindled by the fire of hatred
Entrapped in a well of remorse
My sin is I show my true self
Envy me if u want but you are a lot like me
30/05/07
Wednesday, May 30, 2007
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8 comments:
Well well. Thats more like it. I feel a subtle change in this poem that is different than your others. More positive, stronger and with raw emotion. Just like how poetry should be.
Id like to see how you explore this train of thoughts.
who is a lot like u sis? hehe niice poem:)
thnx :D...
wow, varah varah touchy & poetic poem eh :)
unforgoten .. he is .. hehehe alhu gandu oo :P kekekekee
ehehe.. vedhane dho:P n thanx all
mayb am postin this vry late, bt thi poem kiyaafa hama thaureef nukoh nuhurevigen mi commntkuri...molhu, salhi, baraabaru :D
ehehe thanx ab
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