Monday, August 6, 2007

CLEAN ME!!PATCH ME!! PAINT ME!!




brooms n mops

come sweep off these sorrows

dry these falling tears

come make me clean of this fears



gluestick gluestick

help me put these pieces together

bind them hard so they won't shatter

come help me out of this matter



paintbrush paintbrush

color my world with happiness

blue yellow greens and whites.

come paint my face with smiles

06/08/07'

11 comments:

iecco said...

nice one angel :) different but nice

~ange|~ said...

thnx dear :D

-Gloomcookie said...

cool idea...funny nd nice

shaf said...

simply beautiful

~ange|~ said...

ehehe thnx sis and thanx shaf

Raven said...

very nice hama obi ;)

Naziya said...

niicee.. =D keep postin

Aisha said...

very simple but very expressive. Nice one dear :D

.mini said...

yeah its nice :D
dhen emmen nice ey buneema dheravaane dho? :S
abadhu ekacheh kiyanyaa

hehe..
well, i dont read poems or stuff of this sort
but this one was short and sweet
and luckily i ended reading it :P
so its nice.. :S

lets use another word for nice
varah reethi!
hehe
salhi ingey :D

~ange|~ said...

thnax all:D
mini ehehe thnx n m honoured u read my poem thru :D ehehe thnx

ab said...

Hehe cool.. Creative.. :D